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Hi Reader, Most professional copy sounds like it survived a committee and lost its will to live. Safe writing is forgettable writing—and forgettable writing is expensive. A few ways to surface voice without going off the rails: Choose verbs that move. “Provide” does nothing. “Build, cut, deliver, earn” do the work. Say the sharp thing cleanly. One crisp line beats four polite paragraphs. Keep the reader in the room. “You” outperforms “our clients.” Always. Leave a fingerprint. A phrase you’re known for is a brand asset. Use it. Voice isn’t a vibe. It’s a system you can document and repeat. It’s also why agencies like Alchemy Three bring me in when the message needs to sound like a real human and still hold up strategically. If you want a voice guide you can hand to your team—and copy that actually sounds like you—I do this every day. Work with me: judi411.com Best, P.S. By now, you’ve probably noticed a theme. I’m working on brevity. My emails will be short, sweet, and to the point. I’m already tall, a tad salty, and occasionally verbose. Two out of three I can’t fix, so I’m focusing on the third. |
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