The closest story wins.


Dear Reader,

I have a homework assignment for you.

The next time you're talking with someone who knows you well—a client, a colleague, a referral partner, or a friend—ask them one question.

"If someone asked what I do, what would you tell them?"

Then resist the urge to interrupt.

Don't clarify.

Don't explain what you meant.

Just listen.

Their answer will tell you something interesting.

Sometimes they'll describe your business exactly the way you'd hoped. More often than not, they'll reach for the closest story they have. It usually isn't wrong. It may simply be the story you've been telling for years, even though your business has changed since then. Or perhaps it's language they picked up from your website because, until now, that's been the best explanation available.

People can't repeat words they've never been given.

That's one of the reasons I care so much about voice clarity. It has very little to do with finding clever language. It's about giving the people around you words they can remember, understand, and repeat with confidence when you're not in the room.

If you're curious what story people are carrying about your business, the Voice Clarity Workbook is a good place to start. And if you'd rather explore it together, I'd love to have that conversation.

Let's find your sentence.

Best,

Judi 411 | Judi Harrington

Paralegal and financial pro turned copywriter bringing boring topics to life, serving as the Resident Writing Expert for realtors, attorneys, and financial pros. Check out my emails below and enter your email address to get my freebie, "5 Ways to Make Your Copy UN-Boring"

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